literature

Pressure

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Literature Text

I'm under pressure,
No one can measure,
All this pressure.

It tears at my eyes,
All these damn lies,
I never have time,
Never have time of mine.

This new thing,
Gives me a ring,
A ring of pressure.

We're all under pressure,
We all can measure,
All this damn pressure.

We all never think,
All are under pressure,
And we all can measure,
All this pressure.
I had the 2 part in my head and it needed to be in a poem.

Tell me what you think and how I can improve, Thanks!
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panpansan's avatar
That is an awesome poem!!! Your waaayyy better at poetry than me all I can write is stories :steaming: